Thursday, January 29, 2015


Dear teacher,

               I am emailing you now because I have recently noticed that my grade it not where I would like it to be. I understand that I have not been in class lately,  but can you post all of the assignments online so that I can still do them? Oh, and also please send any extra credit that you have my way.

Thanks a bunch,

Student.

Dear Teacher,
            Over the past few weeks I have noticed that my grade has been declining. Are there any things that you would recommend for me to be able to bring my grade back up? Also do you offer any extra credit that I would be able to complete? Please let me know as soon as possible, I'd like to bring my grade back up as quickly as I can.
Thank You,
Student.

Sunday, January 25, 2015

Passage-Based Focused Freewrite for MLK's "Letter from Birmingham Jail."


A Passage from Letter From Birmingham City Jail: “The Negro has many pent-up resentments and latent frustrations. He has to get them out. So let him march sometime; let him have his prayer pilgrimages to the city hall; understand why he must have sit-ins and freedom rides. If his repressed emotions do not come out in these nonviolent ways, they will come out in ominous expressions of violence. This is not a threat; it is a fact of history. So I have said to my people, “Get rid of your discontent.” But I have tried to say that this normal and healthy discontent can be channeled through the creative outlet of nonviolent direct action.”                                                                                        Throughout his letter, MLK speaks of his actions as positive, and tries to explain them to anybody who could be confused about it. He explains what his four step process to success is, as well as how it has worked in the past, but this passage is unlike the rest of the letter. In this paragraph from the letter, in this portion, his words of wisdom begin to turn into words of fear, much like a small portion of his “I have a dream” speech. MLK’s words turn into that of a discontent among his people, as well as a warning to what this discontent will lead to if not fixed. His words may not come across as a direct threat towards people, nor may that have ever been his intention with the words that he used, but to me they came off particularly threatening. His sentence of “they will come out in ominous expressions of violence” speaks of the pent up emotions that come with not having equal rights as a citizen who should. This “ominous expression of violence” seems to be some kind of way to say that there will be consequences if nothing is done, whether they are burning down of towns on a much more serious end, or simply angry letters on another end of the spectrum, but both of these could be something that could be imagined by somebody reading, or hearing this letter. The potential hazard of this statement is one that I believe should have been treated much more lightly than it was, because this sentence could have been one that had the power to change the outlook of the people looking into this from an outside perspective. While a majority of this letter may have been encompassed around the positives that they strove for, and the happiness that they want in the end, this passage was far from any of that.

Monday, January 19, 2015

Sentence Types in The Declaration of Independence

Simple Sentence: "He has affected to render Military independent of and superior to the Civil power."
Compound Sentence: "He has erected a multitude of New Offices, and send hither swarms of Officers to harass our people, and eat out their substance."
Complex Sentence: "He has refused his Assent to Laws, the most wholesome and necessary for the public good."
Compound-Complex Sentence: "He has forbidden his governors to pass Laws of immediate and pressing importance, unless suspended in their operation till his Assent should be obtained; and when so suspended, he has utterly neglected to attend to them."